Writing Correction 4: Free Writing

Hi dear all,

Remember that as we write, we try to convey our ideas to the reader in a way that he/she can easily get what we have intended to express. So read this free writing, and please do the followings:

A- Correct the mistakes if any

B-Make the ideas clearer by adding or replacing some of the words.

C- There are a few expressions used like gung ho (= excited, enthusiastic or dedicated) so u can try to understand their meaning

How could you change your daily life and create a great future for yourself? You have tried many times to improve your lifestyle and to produce a better future for your self but, your failures kept pulling you back and they makes you believe that overcome them is a last cause.

As far as I am concerned, I think that if you truly want to change your life you need to have the willing of changing your mind. You used to cut classes or to slack off that is beside the point. Today is a new beautiful day with a new beginning, full of energy, creativity and enthusiasm. No matter how old are you or how many opportunities you had missed, if you are so gung ho about turning your life around in the best way, just set a goal for your self and focus on it. Try to figure out what is your heart set on then buckle down to fulfil it. Time is crucial so try to save it by doing a schedule for your daily tasks and set a deadline for each one also don’t let strangers butt in your target.

The key of success is giving a hoot to your knowledge. However, hitting books it’s not enough, you have to follow through and keep patience until the end of your mission. Moreover, you may face some bad experience in your path but don’t let them blow your faith. And, instead of consider them as a dark spot, turn them to stepping point toward success.

 My last advice is remain surrounded by optimist people and positive mindsets, because only those they will support you and gives you a boost to realize your dream. In other word, persons who demotivate you surly they are green with envy, since they are certain that the day when you will be a head and shoulders above them is near. Don't let your dream be just a dream, work hard to make it truth.